Welcome to the party motherfuckers: samishii-kami replied to your post: Berry says I can appeal for more...
Yeah I had to write an appeal too… good luck. Also it is okay to make them feel bad, just not so obviously (I know this was more a rant version). I think my letter is still saved on my…
name, year, reason for writing letter. mention how tuition prices keep rising but financial aid has not. no help from other family members. while your gpa has faltered, you know you can improve, the initial transition to college classes just caught you off guard.
you can put in some personal examples, but dont make it too overbearing or whiney. My letter was only two paragraphs long. That doesn’t mean you can’t write a longer one if you have more to write or feel it is necessary. Also thank them for their consideration

